Week 3 Story: Higgledy-Piggledy Palace

A Poem: Higgledy-Piggledy Palace

Abraham, fleeing Canaan, took in hand
his wife, Sarah – who was of extraordinary beauty
            alien to mortal eyes
as followers of God.

Love and God’s will
had them tied, bonds a test of time,
for Abraham feared
the splendor of his bride
as all who took to gaze
at the great mother of the Jewish people
were bewitched.

Coming to the edge of their past
and into the land of the Pharaoh
Abraham fitted a box
and Sarah climbed inside
to hide the loveliness of her countenance.

This charade failed
and as the chest was opened,
Sarah revealed
in plains-cloth
and looking even more
extraterrestrial.

The Pharaoh saw Sarah,
fell to his knees
in awe of her divine look
and demanded payment be given
to Abraham – in the guise as brother –
            for Sarah.

Alone with riches
beyond even a wealthy man’s dreams,
Abraham clasped his hands,
fell to his knees,
and prayed to his Lord
            for Sarah.

An answer came
into the great room of the Egyptian king
where he attempted to seduce
Sarah’s steadfast loyalty
into destruction
with promises of a kingdom.

With each step
towards the faithful servant,
Pharaoh was alarmed
as great blows
were aimed at his body.

Pharaoh could not
sit or lie or walk down the halls –
            the chairs and floors
            seemed to come alive

though a spirit,
standing invisible,
laughed.

Abraham’s faith
provided safe passage
through Egypt’s visitors,
who warned of their God,
the One God of the universe,

who provided for all.

Author's Note: This tale is my own take on The Higgledy-Piggledy Palace from Jewish Fairy Tales and Legends by Gertrude Landa.  I have put it into a poem.  When Abraham and Sarah pass through Egypt, the Pharaoh is taken by her beauty.  He desires to make Sarah a part of his harem, however, a spirit disagrees and sets to tormenting him until the Pharaoh demands the pair leave.

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Comments

  1. Lauren, I am so impressed by your creativity and making this story into a poem. I really enjoyed all of the detail and imagery you incorporated into your poem. I think that is something that I really need to work on when writing. Also I am fascinated with the character Sarah. I am picturing her in my head because of the great detail you used when describing her and her husband Abraham. I really enjoyed the creativity of this poem!

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  2. Lauren,

    What a creative idea! I don't know as much about poetry as I should, but it seems that there's a natural and consistent cadence through the piece. I also think its cool to re-write stories not by changing plots but by changing how they're told... I think that goes a long way in changing how they're interpreted by the reader.

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