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Week 8 Progress

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Looking Back My weekly routine could be improved, as I mainly do the assignments the day that they are due.  It would be more helpful and better if I were to do the assignments beforehand, that way I have more time for the other assignments such as the storybook.  I haven't been using the extra credit options, but it is something that I have the ability to do.  I think using that opportunity would help improve my work. Looking Forward I would like to try and be more descriptive in my reading posts.  I also want to do the extra credit opportunities when I have the time. Image Image from Pinterest

Week 8 Comments and Feedback

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Feedback In Most of the feedback I am receiving contains a lot of positive feedback.  I don't think I have received the criticism I would like because I find those the most useful.  The type of comments I would like to receive would be focused on bettering me as a writer as opposed to praising the skills I already have.  I think that is something we all tend to do because it is easier and we are worried about being mean.  I would really like to receive some (respectful) criticism even if it may be tough to hear because it will be infinitely more helpful than telling me that I am creative (although I appreciate the compliment).  I will also try harder to do this with my own comments to others. Feedback Out I try to comment mainly on the story's plot and the language being used, although I sometimes see different types of structural errors that I have been taught to avoid.  I prefer to stick to the story's writing as opposed to talking abou...

Week 8 Reading and Writing

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Looking Back Going over my reading posts really opened my eyes to the differences between my first few stories and my most recent.  The first reading post I made was more detailed because it not only explained the story but it also brought up ideas on how I might change it.  I think the stories in which I had included that in the reading notes were much better than those without.  They were more original and I feel more comfortable calling those stories more like my own. Image Art by RaisedbytheVillans I used this image in my week 4 story, the Lonely Dragon and the Cheerful Satyr.   The artwork is my favorite, out of all the other images I have used, because it matched my story so well.  I was really concerned I wouldn't find an image with both dragon and a satyr - let alone one that showed the two getting along rather than fighting.  It is beautiful and so detailed.  The picture is interesting because it has the two characters simply relaxing ...