Story, Week 5: The Character of a Husband
The Character of a Husband
There were three young suitors who had each been told of the great beauty of Coral, the daughter of a merchant. She was extremely pretty, but Coral also held kindness and grace. Her three suitors all fell for the gorgeous woman, but she could not choose between the three.
Her indecision leads to great anxiety until Coral would no longer eat or sleep. It was not long before she began to wither away. For many days, the three lovers mourned. They were devastated by the loss of Coral’s beauty and her gentle heart. With broken hearts, they each took a different path of mourning.
One suitor remained in the cemetery. He was unable to move on, the grief of Coral’s death haunting him at all moments of the day. Each night, he would lie down beside her ashes and each morning he would remain seated at her grave with hollow eyes. The pain of Coral’s death was simply too much for him.
The other two suitors managed to move forward. One of them decided to take Coral’s bones to the river Ganges. He would dip her bones in the sacred waters, in the preservation of her life and honor the beautiful woman. The second chose to become a monk and wonder the countries in search of answers and wisdom. He could not understand the fragility of life but sought to gain a deeper knowledge.
The monk stumbled upon the house of a man, who lived with his family of a wife and a son. He is astonished to witness the child’s mother throw her son into the flames of the fire. However, the monk is even more surprised at the man brings the child back to life with the use of his magic book. The monk is immediately very interested in the magical properties of the man’s book and soon realizes its potential. He knows that he can use it to bring his beloved Coral back to life.
Informing the other suitors of his plan, they take the book and attempt to recreate the spell to bring Coral back to life. However, when the monk tries to resurrect Coral, the thing her ashes and bones rejoin into was not the beauteous woman they had all loved.
The monk is horrified and retreats to a seminary to ask for forgiveness. The man who had kept her bones is stunned and he is unable to remain with Coral for her ugliness reminded him to well of a monster. The third man, however, sat beside her with a smile. He loved her for the heart inside her chest, as a husband should.
Author’s Note: I stuck to the main plot of The Three Lovers who brought the Dead Girl to Life from Twenty-Two Goblins. The major changes that I added were in the ending and I left out the bit about the Goblin and the King. Instead, I made the story a sort of moral about how a husband should love his wife for her heart as opposed to marrying someone for their beauty.
Bibliography:
Twenty-Two Goblins, translated by Arthur W. Ryder, with illustrations by Perham W. Nahl (1917).
I love the picture! It was very "Pride and Prejudice and Zombies." I also like the paragraph separation... it helps to note for the reader where you want them to be in the story and how you intend to split up the narrative. In the future, I'd also encourage you to provide a more thorough summary in the Author's Note. For those of us who didn't read the origin story, it is really helpful in understand where your story is coming from!
ReplyDeleteHi Lauren,
ReplyDeleteThis was a really interesting and fun story to read! There were so many plot twists and surprises, so it really kept me intrigued. You also picked the perfect picture to fit the story line, great job! I really like how you changed this story and made it more unique, and it is also great how you changed the theme: to marry someone for their heart and not for their looks. Overall, really interesting story to read, good job!
Hi, Lauren!
ReplyDeleteThis is such an interesting story! At first, I did not realize that Coral had died, and needed to read on for more context. I found it interesting that the suitors continued to love her even after her death, and was surprised to learn that they did not put up more of a fight when she was resurrected. In that sense, I think you did an excellent job portraying that love is in the heart, not appearances.